Run from ordinary! Live in Extraordinary!
I’m an English teacher, translator, writer and French from Quebec, Canada. I love to just relish in all the unique, extraordinary, craziness that lives within myself and everyone else. I don’t like so much the mustardy smell of ordinary.
I often catch myself wishing I could live in the extraordinary lands along with the characters I’ve created in my novels. It would be so awesome! I would immediately change realms for sure! However, I’m not nuts! Well, not completely anyway. I think. I do realise I’m non-fictional and must live in the reality of our mundane world.
Although, I am a novel writer much more than I am a poet. I hope you will enjoy my writes. I love to read your comments so take the time to jot down a few lines. I’d really appreciate it.
Nicely written poetry with an amazing sense of flow! The poem begins with the beauty of nature and ends with how you feel about love. You have made a beautiful connection between nature and love. And I would say that the rhythm and your choice of words is excellent. The poem genuinely depicted vivid imagery to the mind’s eye.
Such a calm and soothing poem. Its flow was smooth as milk, and the use of imagery was excellent. The lines were very nicely written and very well-built. And I would add a line for you, …magnificent writer is Naomi and so is this poem.
I really like when poems lead and end the same, it is like closing a short story of emotions. I like the title, it emphasizes that this is a moment of being lost in one’s thoughts of a special someone. It reminds me a lot of young love, when the flowers are only just starting to bloom between two people.
Nicely written poetry with an amazing sense of flow! The poem begins with the beauty of nature and ends with how you feel about love. You have made a beautiful connection between nature and love. And I would say that the rhythm and your choice of words is excellent. The poem genuinely depicted vivid imagery to the mind’s eye.
I love how you poured your thoughts into this wonderful poem. The connection between human and nature brings about the sense of calmness and love.
I liked it. The short lines give it a tripping quality, and the imagery – between the natural and the emotional works so well.
Such a calm and soothing poem. Its flow was smooth as milk, and the use of imagery was excellent. The lines were very nicely written and very well-built. And I would add a line for you, …magnificent writer is Naomi and so is this poem.
I really like when poems lead and end the same, it is like closing a short story of emotions. I like the title, it emphasizes that this is a moment of being lost in one’s thoughts of a special someone. It reminds me a lot of young love, when the flowers are only just starting to bloom between two people.