How Green Is My Valley
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"So, the 'Land of my Fathers' is actually the 'Land of my Mothers'! A fact that fails to make it feel anything less than my heartland to me. And it is more than 'of my mothers' because it is 'of my mother's' - my maternal family - though sadly there are none left that I know of as alive today. They only live on in my memory." - Allen Ansell Just how green is my valley below those dark satanic hills? How many familial bones lay there molding to greyish dust? Do the words of my forefathers echo on beyond my ancient head... so that future ears clearly hear what wisdom they actually said? I long to see the rain fall on those grey slag built mountains, where trees are straggly specimens - sometimes misted by the clouds so low that their moist kiss remains on my upward stretching hands. It's where the belly trembles and my heartache truly expands. But how much better would it be were this a sundrenched paradise, where everything was plentiful; where everyone was fulfilled and could afford their daily bread, where cries of pain became instead joyful smiles with ease instilled? © Allen Ansell 2023
Douglas Moody
1 month agoI first read (and commented) on this on Poetbay, and I’m glad to see it being featured here. For me it evoked so much of what it means in having a Welsh heartland (as you say Allen). As I said, I can imagine it being recited by Richard Burton, and that is a compliment. One of your best – Bravo!
Allen Ansell
1 month agoThis is a brilliant illustration of the value of reader’s comments. I’m really grateful for your remarks, and it is rewarding to know that you enjoyed the read and both the nuance and the feel of the poem. I would love to read these aloud myself and record them, but I’m afraid my speaking voice is not all that constant these days. Still, I might give it a bash one day. Blessings, Allen