The Safety Of The Pine Forest
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So she sat with thoughts entwined between the limbs of trees and the tangled limbs of his and hers, in this forest full of tall green pine. Here and there the sun would brake and spin a beam of sparkling light to spear down at lightening speed - less time than Eros' arrow would take To spear a heart and quickly shackle the heart to a dream or to fascination. E'en before a virgin's mind would wake from Love's nectar's intoxication. The realisation she had found released some tears and several sobs muted greatly by falling cones thumping to the earthen ground A modern girl with broken heart who'd seen the bold mendacity of her lover's cyber conversations that broke every one of her expectations... boundaries, trusts, call them what you will. And caught, he at once entreated for her to stay as he loved her still: but alone here she'd rather be thus seated... Until all these safe tall pines send her their strength and resolution. Then she'll sigh and return to life freeing herself from his diminution. © Allen Ansell 2022
Douglas Moody
1 year agoI can only copy what I posted on PoetBay for this excellent poem.
‘If I may say, an excellent poem. I particularly liked the way you’ve married a modern form of betrayal to an ageless style.
Bravo Allen’
If I can add anything it is that there is story being teased out in a subtle form.
Mike
1 year agoExquisite poem Allen; I am short of words to explain how good it was. The way you have described her state is really awesome, I enjoyed your poem a lot. Thanks. Mike.
Allen Ansell
1 year agoIt is always rewarding to have comments, and I must thank you Mike for reading this and telling me of your appreciation of it.
Allen